Friday, March 10, 2006

Love Poems

Diana is googly eyed for a boy and this is a great time for her 10 year old brother, Isaac, to let his creativity flow freely. He was composing poetry for his sister and the boyfriend in question. Here are some of the gems.

Roses are red
Like a fiery comet.
Your face could make
Quasimodo vomit.

Roses are red
Violets are blue
If something smells bad
It's gotta be you

Roses are red
And here's a small chant
I wish you would drown
In a waste treatment plant.


Please feel free to let this stimulate your inner poet and share a few verses with me.
Happy Weekend all!

*UPDATE: Here's another one the boy added just tonight!
Roses are red,
Daffodils, yellow
You may be a girl
But you look like a fellow

19 comments:

  1. Roses are red
    we hear it all the time,
    nothing starts the day
    like a good read at Lime.


    Yeah - I'm lame , I know.

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  2. roses are red
    black when they're dead
    like a patient etherized upon a table....

    no wait..I am sure i can do better after coffee

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  3. Roses are red
    Dianas lips are too
    And that boys gonna kiss em
    And there's nothing you can do!

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  4. hahaha...Siblings are just great aren't they.

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  5. hahaha...Siblings are just great aren't they.

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  6. Violets are purple
    Roses are red
    I'm only with you
    Cuz I'm sick in the head...

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  7. Anonymous3:46 PM

    cute, we have another budding poet on our hands, gees I wonder where he gets it from? lol

    have a great weekend lime.:)

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  8. Anonymous3:50 PM

    Roses are blue
    and their stems have pricks...
    maybe ought to leave it at that, eh?

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  9. Anonymous4:02 PM

    LMAO...has big sister seen these poems? He might be risking his life, expressing his creativity in unorthodox way. ;)

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  10. Hey there... darn, I have lost your e-mail. Not sure how that happened, too. So I dropped by to say "hi" and thank you for visiting my blog so much the last few weeks. NO, your words were not too blunt or harsh... NEVER. In fact, your style is one of the things I like about you. Don't stop! YES! YES! YES! (OH, sorry, wrong screenplay.)

    Drop me a note when you can. Have a great weekend... still loving the motorcycle pic!

    xx

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  11. those are great. Hope you have a good weekend.

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  12. Your son is adorable....I base this knowledge purely on his poetry. I came to thank you for your comment on my blog and found a gem.

    (That means you!)

    Can't wait to read more.

    EroticFae

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  13. your son has quite a knack for this type of thing. I loved them. :D

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  14. Protective Brother...great! Sounds like a great lad :)

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  15. He's just ten, and coming up with these? I bet it's way fun at your house.

    Your poor daughter. Except, she's probably strong enough to take it and sling it back.

    On thin ice you are skating,
    Little brother, take care:
    Soon you'll start dating
    Your sister's revenge, beware!

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  16. oh dear all. i just found out he plagarized all but the last one from forxtrot comments! he fessed up. eeek!!!! sorry all. my face is red!

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  17. Anonymous2:00 AM

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  18. Hey, the internet's there for all of us to copy. That's what my students think, anyway.

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