Friday, May 12, 2006

Rainy Day Friday Flash Fiction

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Tracks of water run down the windowpane.
I drag my fingertips along your back.
Parched earth drinks in the water.
You quench my thirst with deep kisses.
Hard rain pounds the roof.
Our bodies pulse together.
Thunder crashes.
I cry out and you shudder.
The gentler pit-pat raindrops
echo my slowing heartbeat
and we sigh.

20 comments:

steve said...

What a wonderful way to start a weekend!!

Jodes said...

very nice.

barefoot_mistress said...

oooh goody for Lime! LOL! Thanks for playing gal~

snavy said...

WOW!! I loved that!! Beautiful sweetie!!

Gary said...

As he took another drink,John said "Either those trees are growing sideways, or I'm driving in the ditch."

The Village Idiot said...

Your version of inspiration sounds much more inviting than mine!

gloria jean said...

Lovely...

miss_lissa said...

mmmm
that sounds like perfection.

Rob said...

Oh man, Michelle! I think I need a cigarette! ;-)

Great post!

Breazy said...

WOW! that was awesome Lime ! I also love the pic you posted with it ! Have a good weekend and Happy Mother's Day!

Tommy Gunn said...

Damn, Michelle. You promised you wouldn't tell anyone. Great one. I will post mine later in Susie's comments. Have a great weekend love.
TG

DaMasta said...

Hey Limerz! That was great!

Hope you're healin up nicely, and Happy Mother's Day!!

xoxo

MyUtopia said...

Lovely. Sorry to hear that it is rainy.

airplanejayne said...

beautiful!!!!!

Logophile said...

ooooooo
I like it,
I like it alot.
Good job, Michellle!

Blueprincesa said...

You know, you're really good at those. Maybe I'll try one sometime. They intimidate me a little.

Moosekahl said...

That's how I spent Friday night, at least there are soem good things about a hard steady rain!

Phain said...

makes me want to pray for a rain storm...and for someone to chase me into the bedroom ;)

Seamus said...

Happy Mother's Day Michelle! :)

David said...

Wow, that is really good

BTW...Try using a leather belt to reach that itch. It worked wonders for everytime I have had a cast...Hmmm...a total of five.

Happy Mothers Day as well.