Friday, April 23, 2010

Friday 55-Flight

*image from secondattention.org



Danger approaches
but I am paralyzed.
Fear finally moves my feet
though I plod through quicksand.
As the chase continues,
my muscles strain
until I find solid ground,
gain speed.
The predator closes in.
I feel his hot breath,
know he will overtake me
with one lunge
until
my final surge
sends me safely skyward.

18 comments:

Craig said...

Whew! Glad you made it safely!

Nice bit of wordsmithery, Lime. . .

G-Man said...

Wow Trini...
This was fantastic!
I wish it were so easy to elude our demons...You Rock!
Great 55..
Thank you for this gem.
And please fly skyward to a Kick Ass Week-End...G

furiousBall said...

this was really good! the accompanying illustration too!

John (@bookdreamer) said...

Good stuff. See if you can spot the lyrics in my 55 words

Brian Miller said...

whew! wish i had the power to fly...nice 55.

mine is up!

S said...

Fly away, fly!

Unknown said...

To be able to fly... WOW..
Wonderful words...
Mine is here

Have a FANTASTIC FRIDAY now!
hugs
shakira

Hilary said...

A dream? Your last job? Or ET? Whichever it might be.. it certainly conveyed suspense. Nice.

PattiKen said...

Wow, great imagery, Lime. That sounds just like one of my recurring nightmares as a kid. Have you been channeling my psyche?

(And my captcha for this is "pattical." Cue Twilight Zone music!)

Jessie said...

your imagery here is fabo. i really enjoyed this.

~Dragonfly~* said...

Excellent writing... I don't know how you do it on a regular basis!!! You should start writing a book....

Craver Vii said...

See. I TOLD you it was a bad idea to eat a sandwich before going to sleep!

Neat story. I imagine this tale lends itself to taking flight, and from some of the comments, it appears that others do to.

Jingle said...

powerful 55,
I wish I can fly,
cheers!

Craver Vii said...

... do too. It appears that others do too. Sheesh, my spelling has just gone down the toilet lately! I used to be the guy who never spelled anything wrong.

Lulda Casadaga said...

one day we will fly! :0
Great 55 and love the illustration.
Have a fantastic weekend!!

Jocelyn said...

I don't like feeling you as the prey; I like you as predator...well conveyed!

Cosima said...

I had the same dream. One of a few nightmares that I remembered even after waking up. I think it's because it had a happy end.

Dave said...

An interesting little poem Michelle, written about the picture? - Dave