Thursday, January 24, 2013

Friday Haiku

 
 
 
 
 
countless wings flicker
against late afternoon sky
daylight's stars twinkle

18 comments:

Rastaman said...

I like your Haiku!

G-Man said...

Poor Little Trini
She could only manage ten
I NEED FIFTY-FIVE!!!!!

Kat said...

Beautiful haiku to go with the picture. Love it!
I miss Haiku Fridays.

Stephen Hayes said...

This photo looks like beads on the shower curtain of Heaven.

Stephen Hayes said...

I should have added that your haiku is marvelous.

Barbara Shallue said...

Beautiful!

Leave It To Davis said...

Those are a LOT of birds!!!

Tabor said...

Lots of daylight stars!

razzamadazzle said...

Beautiful haiku! It perfectly complements the photo.

Secret Agent Woman said...

I love seeing huge flocks in flight. Magic!

Yvonne Osborne said...

I'm always a sucker for haiku. Nicely done, but next time give the G-Man three or four...whatever it takes!

Other Mary said...

They really do look like daylight star flickers! Cool pic and haiku!

coopernicus said...

my poetry blows
especially when it's this
goofy ass haiku

Beach Bum said...

Very nicely done!

(M)ary said...

lovely haiku!

Mama Zen said...

Pretty!

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