Thursday, July 22, 2010

Friday 55-July

Do you remember
how our eyes met 
that day,
measuring your hand
against mine,
 my smile 
when I tasted the cake 
in your kiss,
sharing the blanket 
under the trees,
 rocking gently
as we embraced,
steadying me 
against your chest
when pleasure 
overwhelmed me?
Do you remember
the taste 
of desire
on a summer 
afternoon?






21 comments:

Jocelyn said...

The new look here makes me feel like I'm on a walk down a dirt road through the woods with you. Love it!

Oh, and in response to your poem: yes, I remember, honey. I remember.

Brian Miller said...

wow. smoking 55...the taste of cake on the lips...mmm...nice.


my 55 is up!

g-man said...

I need a cigarett!!
Very sensual Trini, I liked this a lot.
Beautiful as you...
Most excellent 55.
Thanks for playing so HOTLY today.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Cricket said...

Y'know something? We think of haiku as that 5-7-5 form but, as I understand it, to the Japanese we're totally missing the point.

The point is a good haiku needs to have a shift of consciousness that captures the essence of a moment, somehow. That's their aesthetic.

Your 55s do that a lot. Very nice.

Mona said...

Sensual memories!

Great write Lime!

mrsnesbitt said...

Wow! Yes I remember! lol!
Awesome 55!

Dx

Beach Bum said...

Wow! That was hot!
Great post!

John's comments said...

ooh missus! My 55 here

jinksy said...

More a dream than a memory in my case! LOL :)

Cocotte said...

I remember it!

Jazz said...

I remember too. And did I mention I love your new look?

Claudia said...

..when I tasted the cake in your kiss..is just soooo romantic... sigh....
Claudia

Craig said...

I do remember. . .

And 30 years in, it can still happen. . .

Mama Zen said...

Oh, this is beautiful!

~Tim said...

Wow. This summer day just got a lot hotter. And I like the new look too.

PattiKen said...

Wow. So romantic! And yes, hot!

I’m up here.

~Dragonfly~* said...

Incredibly sensual and beautiful...
You are truly talented Lime.

Alice Audrey said...

Excellent 55. Sweet and loving.

steveroni said...

YESSSSS! I DO. I mean , I DO remember!!!

Mine is HERE

Moannie said...

Oh yes! I remember as if it were yesterday.
It was!

Beautiful, Lime.

Shrinky said...

Breathtaking! What a powerful writer, you are.

Love the new look!