Do you remember
how our eyes met
that day,
measuring your hand
against mine,
my smile
when I tasted the cake
in your kiss,
sharing the blanket
under the trees,
rocking gently
as we embraced,
steadying me
against your chest
when pleasure
overwhelmed me?
Do you remember
the taste
of desire
on a summer
afternoon?
21 comments:
The new look here makes me feel like I'm on a walk down a dirt road through the woods with you. Love it!
Oh, and in response to your poem: yes, I remember, honey. I remember.
wow. smoking 55...the taste of cake on the lips...mmm...nice.
my 55 is up!
I need a cigarett!!
Very sensual Trini, I liked this a lot.
Beautiful as you...
Most excellent 55.
Thanks for playing so HOTLY today.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Y'know something? We think of haiku as that 5-7-5 form but, as I understand it, to the Japanese we're totally missing the point.
The point is a good haiku needs to have a shift of consciousness that captures the essence of a moment, somehow. That's their aesthetic.
Your 55s do that a lot. Very nice.
Sensual memories!
Great write Lime!
Wow! Yes I remember! lol!
Awesome 55!
Dx
Wow! That was hot!
Great post!
ooh missus! My 55 here
More a dream than a memory in my case! LOL :)
I remember it!
I remember too. And did I mention I love your new look?
..when I tasted the cake in your kiss..is just soooo romantic... sigh....
Claudia
I do remember. . .
And 30 years in, it can still happen. . .
Oh, this is beautiful!
Wow. This summer day just got a lot hotter. And I like the new look too.
Wow. So romantic! And yes, hot!
I’m up here.
Incredibly sensual and beautiful...
You are truly talented Lime.
Excellent 55. Sweet and loving.
YESSSSS! I DO. I mean , I DO remember!!!
Mine is HERE
Oh yes! I remember as if it were yesterday.
It was!
Beautiful, Lime.
Breathtaking! What a powerful writer, you are.
Love the new look!
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