Delicate enough to be destroyed by a careless wanderer,
Strong enough to fatally ensnare,
Your love is spider silk.
I was beguiled by your deceptive beauty.
I will not flail in panic
but
I will safely depart
your web
and
warn others
lest they too
become entangled.
13 comments:
oo...yeah dont get tangled up in this one....could be fatal....smiles.
so... the trick is to remain cool, calm, and collected. Not so easy to do when "Mr. Charming" has done you wrong! :)
An interesting interpretation of a spider's web. I like how you refer both to its beauty as well as its deadliness.
Where's MaryJane?? Doc Octopus?
Trini...
Very creative and intriguing.
Fantastically beautiful observation
Loved your Arachnid 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
I wish I could say this to chocolate.
Did not see the twist coming at the end. I thought at first you would cease struggling and cling to the web. Nicely done!
Nice poetry there. However, I can hardly imagine a woman of your wit and intelligence being anything less than the spider :-)
Ooooh. . . very poignant. . .
Reminds me of a girl I once took to the prom. . .
;)
Very cool 55! I love the picture prompt but your poetry more! Excellent.
Mine is here
Have you a ROCKING AND BLESSED WEEKEND!!!
hugs
shakira
Very cool writing!
Did you take that picture? I like the cool green glow. I haven't done well photographing spider webs. :-(
The ideas of flailing and safety combined in my head so that I've got "Safety Dance" playing on a neverending track in my head. Thanks a lot.
This is beautiful Lime. I've missed reading you.
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